am i someone...or something?
walking through the inbetween
which lies somewhere i do not know
with life in front of me
and death at my behind
everything i touch seems to wither
when did i ever become this
this...this creature
i am not evil
i am not good
i just do my job
assigned by the voice in my head
haunted and damned
i take but do not give
i am hated but show no hate
i am known but forgotten
life is nothing but a dream to me
and something tangible i can snatch in an instant
if its not your time its the person next to you
so you better reach out an touch their hand
before i do...
the grim reaper doesnt knock on anyones
deeper than the senses? by CreationsByGabrielle, literature
Literature
deeper than the senses?
see me
with your gorgeous eyes
i hope i do not disappoint you
hear me
with your soft ears
i hope my voice doesnt peirce you
taste me
with your tender lips
i hope i do not displease you
touch me
with your gentle hands
i hope i do not scratch you
smell me
with your little nose
i hope i do not offend you
but if you lack one of the above
how will i ever please you fully?
am i someone...or something?
walking through the inbetween
which lies somewhere i do not know
with life in front of me
and death at my behind
everything i touch seems to wither
when did i ever become this
this...this creature
i am not evil
i am not good
i just do my job
assigned by the voice in my head
haunted and damned
i take but do not give
i am hated but show no hate
i am known but forgotten
life is nothing but a dream to me
and something tangible i can snatch in an instant
if its not your time its the person next to you
so you better reach out an touch their hand
before i do...
the grim reaper doesnt knock on anyones
deeper than the senses? by CreationsByGabrielle, literature
Literature
deeper than the senses?
see me
with your gorgeous eyes
i hope i do not disappoint you
hear me
with your soft ears
i hope my voice doesnt peirce you
taste me
with your tender lips
i hope i do not displease you
touch me
with your gentle hands
i hope i do not scratch you
smell me
with your little nose
i hope i do not offend you
but if you lack one of the above
how will i ever please you fully?
hey all
i am going to start working on my first ever poetry book that i am going to try and get published....so please crtique as many works of poetry of mine as u can so i know where i need to polish my skills...and what i need to work on
thanksss